Wednesday, May 25, 2011

Mighty Writing part III


The  big  boat. 
A  boat dissapeide   from    nower   and   it  was    rely  big  and  was  cool. And  the  pepl  were  happey.                  
By Jack


I   love   my  mum  I   love   my    mum   so   much    because    I    love       my     dad    to     I   like    playing    games    with    them   my     favourite   game   is   connect four.                It     was       me    who      won    
By    Mackenzie 

MUM         AND         DAD          WENT         TO           TH E          WEHUS
AND      DAD        GOT       A             BUZZ LIGHTYEAR TOY FOR ME
By Rory

I   am   going  to    see   Kate  it   is   going   be  fun it is  she  is wearing   a   skirt  it  is  prity.  And  it   has  sparkles    and  has   kittens   it     is  very  fun

By Rosa



I am going to macdonalds
we       kant     wait      my  mum   is going    to come     andjoshk       
I   am    gonto     ete cheps     an   nags
we cant wait   

By Josh K


In the  weekend  I   went  to         What Now    and  I     saw          kamila the gorilla     and    I   saw   the  robot  lase   and   I      wose   on   tv   and   I    saw   the    milky  bar    kid    and   I   had  a   milky bar     and   we   got  to   toe   beose    and   I  got  a   juice      

By Mason A


We are going to the beach and I like collecting. I will get musels and we will eat them. My whole family will eat them.
By Ollie






1 comment:

  1. What exciting writing! I am glad you have decided to write on the laptops. They DO take a lot of time, but I like reading your stories. You have very interesting things to say!

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